[Mon May 8 2006] [18:55:06] <dannya> kwwii: the title of the "support" section doesn't have the same gap as the other sections
[Mon May 8 2006] [18:56:17] <dannya> kwwii: and I think there needs to be more vertical separation between the kubuntu and canonical bits at the bottom
[Mon May 8 2006] [18:56:50] <dannya> kwwii: and also, have both "regular" text strings at the bottom in the same font and colour?
[Mon May 8 2006] [18:58:56] <dannya> kwwii: maybe change "via a network" to "via the network", and adept to apt
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:00:09] <dannya> kwwii: change "you can find more information, including" to "you can find more information sources, including"
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:00:39] <dannya> kwwii: and remove the trailing "." at the end of the .de url
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:00:58] <dannya> kwwii: and from the .org one above
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:01:50] <dannya> kwwii: make "IRC-" just "IRC", so that it is consistent within the document
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:02:41] <dannya> kwwii: under "usability", change "fast and easy, you can" to "fast and easy, and you can"
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:04:28] <dannya> kwwii: is there a double-space between "Apple iBook"?
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:05:11] <dannya> kwwii: "translations" to "translation"
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:05:47] <dannya> kwwii: a double-space between "Each release"?
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:06:35] <dannya> kwwii: "predictably;" should be "predictably:"? (I read something on grammar today ;))
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:08:55] <dannya> kwwii: the openoffice segment needs a "." at the end
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:09:40] <dannya> kwwii: "as file manager" > "as a file manager"
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:10:23] <dannya> kwwii: internet has alternating capitalisation throughout the document
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:10:57] <dannya> kwwii: a double-space between "specialised software"?
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:11:52] <dannya> kwwii: the "what is kubuntu?" title doesn't have the same vertical space as other main title segments
[Mon May 8 2006] [19:12:35] <dannya> kwwii: that concludes my review :D