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#41307 ·published 2006-02-12 19:08 UTC
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INT. CFADE IN
INT. WHITE ROOM - NIGHT

Screams


Angel of Death:	God whispers to me...(CA)

Black screen.

More screams.

Slap noise

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INT. BEDROOM - NIGHT

Shows wife holding a thong and yelling at the husband and the wife starts crying and sits down in a chair, guy storms out holding the the slapped cheek.

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EXT. CAR - NIGHT

Shows another girl driving in a car in an empty lane, no other cars in a very wooded area with the cheating husband.

Camera moves away from car and shows the car driving while camera floats up.

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CABIN - NIGHT

Shows the girl eating ice cream watching TV talking to the boyfriend. They hear a bunch of rattling outside.

Girl turns off TV and sets ice cream on the table.

Husband:	Did you just hear that Lisa?

Lisa:	Yea, yea, I am going to call the police.

Picks up phone and starts dialing.

Girl:	Yea, Police? I am hearing weird noises outside my house, c--
Phone cuts off. 		

Detective looks around to see no police around.

Detective Jim: Damn.

Right when he hangs up the phone it shows him wake up from bed.

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INT. BEDROOM - MORNING

Raises up stretches his arms by opening them really wide. Rotates to the side and gets out of bed, takes a drink of water from the table next to him, drinks it and stumbles to the bathroom. He looks in the mirror and straightens out his hair a little (still messy) and grabs his tooth brush and starts brushing his teeth. 

Cut through that part and shows him buttoning up his jacked.

Cut through that to show him walking out the door.

Walking down the street.

Man1:		Hey they Jim, how are you doing?

Detective Jim:	Pretty good.

Man2:		Hey, how did that date go last week?

Detective Jim:	Great, thanks for asking Mr.Philline.

Jim walks into cafe and takes a seat at the counter

Waitress walks up

Waitress:		G’morning Jim. The usual?

Jim smiles

Jim:			That would be great Alley.

Jim picks up paper and starts reading it

Alley comes back with a plate with hashbrowns and coffee.

Alley: 		Here’ya go Jim.

Jim:			Thank you very much, and those earings look great on you.

Alley:			Oh, why thank you, and you’re welcome.

Jim takes a sip of coffee and puts to hashbrowns in his mouth. He takes a look at his watch, and gets up really quickly and throws money on the table, and starts running out the door.

Runs to work, gets inside and sits down on his chair and starts writing.
Screen turns black reading “That night”

Shows him sitting in his chair playing with his pencil. And it shows the phone ring and he looks around and just goes over and picks it up. 

Alley:			“Yea Police? I am hearing strange noises outside my house, c---”	
Credits

FADE OUT