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bruno

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Mononoke QC - bruno

02:53 - "What is it?"
He says "jijii" and I see no reference to that on the sub.
Perhaps add an "old man" or something?


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08:30 - won't it be used a honorrific for "prince"?
It was used for princess in the title, and there's "-sama" everywhere.
Just wondering.


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09:52 - He says "Hai" but there is no sub at the time.


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23:37 - the note on top is too transparent in my opinion.
It could be a little more opaque.


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30:02 - says Koroku
30:18 - says Koruku
31:35 - says Koroku

What's the correct one? There's at least one wrong...


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32:54 - "whould've got"
Shouldn't it be "gotten"?


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41:20 - "looked upon us as human"
Shouldn't it be 'humans'?


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43:31 - no karaoke for this insert song?
It could have one, imo.


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44:08 - she says "tabibito-san" but there's no reference to that in the subtitle.


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44:12 - what's that apostrophe after days for?


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46:58 - aren't there too many "for"s there?
I think one of those could be removed...


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01:14:31 - it seems to me like he uses an honorific after "Asano"
I'll leave that to someone who understand Japanese better than me


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01:18:52 - no insert karaoke?


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01:20:20 - "A beautiful woods"
This "woods" looks wrong to me.
Maybe "Such beautiful woods" would be better?


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01:34:30
He says "Eboshi-dono", not "Eboshi-sama"
THis could use a note explaining the -dono, but that's open for debate


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01:34:56
Is that "till" correct?
No need for an apostrophe before it? Just wondering.


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01:34:59
He uses "-dono" after Eboshi. It should be in the subtitle.


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01:39:49
Doesn't she use an honorific? Calling a god just by his name doesn't seem like it.
Perhaps a translator could pay good attention to this and see if she does use anything.
I'd say I hear "Okkoto-ni-sama" or something like that.
And the next few times she says his name, I still hear the "ni-sama" or something. Could be looked at.


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01:45:23
I think the ' should come before the comma.