1:39 best tl? (I don't know what "it" refers to)
1:40 best tl?
2:11 "Now, let's continue..."
3:15 Bad TS for title screen (dunno if it's final or not)
3:22 missing tl for "Hai"
3:24 I don't hear the dialog for "Guess what?"
3:56 "Yeah." stays on the screen for too long
3:59 better tl for itterasshai?
4:01 better tl for itekkimasu?
4:29 missing comma after "and"
4:51 sub fades kinda early
4:55 sub fades kinda early
5:13 "Somewhere in his heart, Shinji-kin is probably afraid..."
5:52 missing -kun
6:34 subs appears early
8:27 subs fade early
12:25 better spacing of TS, esp for "Total floor space Maximum capacity"
12:49 "The fourth Angel shows up..."?
13:52 "toilet" instead of "john"?, even though they don't say toilet
14:13 ts the broken toilet sign?
14:17 sub is elevated
15:46 "Do it just as planned. Okay, Shinji-kun?"
16:21 "Getting beaten up..."
17:11 "Shinji-kun, are you alright?! Shinji-kun?!"
17:14 better tl for "Ikimasu"?