1. The American social system is one that does not support the lower class, despite apparent ideology surrounding the
contrary. This is a strong argument, one that can be argued strongly for or against by the author and the reader.
2. The author demonstrates smooth interweaving between his base essay and his demonstrative television show
3. The author has effectively used his TV show to further his case without overdoing its synopsis.
4. The author makes several references to an in-class article throughout the essay.
5. The author effectively summarizes the article.
6. The author uses the television show to accurately argue his point - in this case an example would be his comparision
of the powerful executive on the show to the collective subconscious of the wealthy in America.
7. There is no repitition and the paper is structured in a logical manner.
8. The author's points flow smoothly between paragraphs.
9. The paper seems gramatically correct.
10. All quotations are properly cited.
11. Effective analysis of comedy as a means to lightly present an overarching grim circumstance.
Sentence structure very smooth to read.
12. Essay needs a strong conclusion and an embellishment on "pulling themselves up by their bootstraps."
13. A