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CLAN BROBERST - COSMIC FIGHTING

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CLAN BROBERST;
POST-APOCALYPTIC BROTHERHOOD ACTION!!

☼☼Setting☼☼
Post-apocalyptic world, it has been over 200 years since the nuclear missle crisis, the earth is barely habitable, people now live in underground cities, there is now much faith in the world due to humanity establishing contact with the Goddess Lenny, this is a time of piety and reconstruction of the world.

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¤¤MAIN CHARACTERS v.2¤¤

•Lenny: Mother Goddess, Narrator, telling story as a narrator, after the events have taken place. Knows mSyne has captured spoony, but is content to watch.

•Boss: Snarky(?) genre-savvy guy who helps out the protagonists on the adventure, if you can make his character better youre welcome to try ^^.

•Stoli: The derpy hero of the story, the drunken childhood friend of spoony and syne, goes out on an adventure with spoony only to have her kidnapped, but when confronted with mSyne the situation is more dire than it seems, and now journeys to stop the destruction of the rest of the earth.

•Setanyan: stoli's very idiotic robotic cat, comic relief squad.

•SIGH~N: Childhood friend of stoli and spoony, serious and cynical, she is the foil to stoli.

•Spoony: Priestess, and childhood friend of syne and stoli, is head priestess in an underground city, goes to the surface with stoli to salvage for the church, end up being kidnapped and is being used as a macguffin to save(?) the world.

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¤¤Others¤¤

•ClearTailCat: friend of alto's, character of plot advancement.

•Ari: hermit, knows syne somehow, has predictded the end of the world, sets the hero's on their fools errand in earnest.

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¤¤Villians¤¤

•Mecha-Syne: mechanical clone of syne, lenny's subordinate, gained sentience and seeks to restore the world due to her bosses laziness, is a well-intentioned extremist, is using spoony as a method to restor the world to its former glory, the main characters think she is insane.

•Alto: mysterious villian who is working with mSyne to restore the world, motives are unknown.


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☼☼Plot☼☼

Well, I've kinda taken this from golden sun, but its a plot that works, Mecha-Syne(always chaotic evil) rebells from Lenny, kidnaps Spoony, sends Alto/Bunny(chaotic neutral) to use Spoony as the macguffin of plot advancement to save(?) the world, but Stoli and co. think that it will destroy the world, and venture to stop alto & Mecha-Syne.


Alto's notes: any suggestions are wonderfully appreciated.