006:
"You Dimwit!!" <- avoid text outside the box, and only use one exclaimation mark
"I can't believe it! Do you want to do this or not??" only use one question mark, possibly make it "?!"
009:
"Huh!?" change "!?" to "?!"
011:
"There's no way I'd do something like that, is there?" - drop "is" on the same line as "there?"
013:
"We're siblings... if you go any further..." - Have "further on one line together instead of line broken, and just have the eclipse on the line by itself
014:
"I got carried away when you provoked me. I'm such an idiot for a second I thought you were kind of cute." - line break differently. I'd suggest having "of" on the same line as "cute."
"You felt like that? ... about me?" There's 2 bubbles attached there, feel free to use them. "You felt like that" line broken as one word per line like this:
"You
felt
like
that?"
Then:
"...
about
me?" in the second attached bubble, let me know if this doesn't make sense.
015:
"Wha!?" switch out the "!?" to "?!"
019:
"AAAHH!" in the first panel doesn't really need a Word Warp, but the font is fine
"So much...!" Most of the time avoid combinations of punctuation except for "?!" so I would get rid of the eclipse on this one. (Once in a while there's an exception to the rule, but for the most part avoid doing so)
022:
"there's no way I could hate you!!" Just one exclaimation mark