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You don't know who I am says (5:25 PM):
 cool
ayane says (5:25 PM):
 thanks
You don't know who I am says (5:25 PM):
 I would move his nose over the the left more
You don't know who I am says (5:26 PM):
 and get rid of the dent above his lip
 and make the lips not as long from left to right
ayane says (5:26 PM):
 dent?
You don't know who I am says (5:26 PM):
 Well
 the little
 thing
 i don't know what it's called
 above the lip
 between the nose and upper lip
ayane says (5:27 PM):
 why would i get rid of that?
You don't know who I am says (5:27 PM):
 because it would make the picture look better? 
ayane says (5:27 PM):
 it's supposed to be semi realistic
You don't know who I am says (5:27 PM):
 so?
ayane says (5:28 PM):
 if you looked at a photo of someone, you would see a shadow over there
You don't know who I am says (5:28 PM):
 Then just make it not as big
 whatever
ayane says (5:29 PM):
 okay thanks
You don't know who I am says (5:29 PM):
 8'(
 Why are you thanking me
 I just told you everything that was WRONG with something you drew
 why do you say THANKYOU to that?!  
ayane says (5:30 PM):
 why not?
You don't know who I am says (5:30 PM):
 D':
 WHY
ayane says (5:31 PM):
 ? criticism is a good thing, isn't it?
You don't know who I am says (5:31 PM):
 not really /:C
ayane says (5:32 PM):
 don't people request critiques on deviantart?
You don't know who I am says (5:32 PM):
 Sure...
ayane says (5:32 PM):
 sure?
You don't know who I am says (5:32 PM):
 yes
ayane says (5:32 PM):
 isn't critique something wanted?
You don't know who I am says (5:33 PM):
 I guess so
ayane says (5:33 PM):
 so why wouldn't i say thank y ou?
You don't know who I am says (5:33 PM):
 nevermind
ayane says (5:33 PM):
 okay then xD